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Thursday, July 30, 2020

hi this here is an activity i have done for reading. so Basically i have drawn a plane and labeled the parts of the plane and added a little sentence underneath about what it is with help of the internet. The main thing i found interesting was the fuselage it holds things together- carry payload i think i could've made my handwriting a bit better and put just that little bit more effort.
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5 comments:

  1. jenaydeJuly 30, 2020 at 10:23 AM

    Hi Ella, i really like what you have done with your plane and labelling everything, maybe nexttime you could tell us why you did this. Jenayde

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  2. PAYTONJuly 30, 2020 at 10:24 AM

    Ella-Rose
    i like this post because the photo is very clear and im able to see what the writing says. the colour really does help the picture pop. something i think would help is, the lines that help me know there the peaces of the plane is i would like to see them more clear and not everywhere. over all this blog post is great. have a good day. [ and i took the photo ]

    Bye, Payton

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  3. Ruby-mayAugust 5, 2020 at 10:23 AM

    Hello Ella-Rose
    your plane looks really great and so is the description and since you highlighted the words it nice and easy to read but i cant really see the turbine engine so maybe you could out line it, you could also add some more colour to the plane i like the description at the bottom how you told us more about it.
    -Ruby-may

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  4. SARAIAAugust 17, 2020 at 10:48 AM

    Hi Ella
    This is actually really interesting! although it was hard for me to read the explanations its still really cool i love how you drew the plane and highlighted the words all nice and pretty maybe next time you could write it a little neater of bigger since its sorta hard to read.

    Saraia :)

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  5. Micayla August 20, 2020 at 9:24 AM

    Hi Ella,
    I really like your blog post about your plane. I like how the description was detailed and told us what you were doing.
    Next time you could write a little neater.
    Great job!!
    Micki

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