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Thursday, August 6, 2020
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Hi Ella, this is really cool. How long did it take you to make ? I like how you set out the writing so then its not all bunched up into one tiny paragraph. This reminded me of a book i read a book quite similar. Maybe next time you could explain why you did this slide and if it was for a reading activaty or not. Jenayde
ReplyDeleteHi Ella rose!
ReplyDeleteI really like your post, it
is very informational and it
can help a lot with someone
who doesn't know what a
paragraph is, but some of us
don't know the story so maybe
you can link somewhere.Also
it will be good to have a description
like how you did it or why, and that
can also be where the link to the
story goes! Otherwise I love it.